There were 4 kids there names were Ben, Matatia, Musharraf and Turua. They were walking to school but Ben said” let’s go to the park, I don't want to go school our teacher is boring. Fine ben just be quiet said Matatia and ben shushed up. Musharraf said” I bought my rugby ball and Matatia said i bought my soccer ball, but we said” we’ll play tackle rugby instead.
When we got there Turua said” I feel like we're being followed. Ben said” there our teacher Miss Hills (she's on a break) they all hided behind a bush, but then when Miss Hills was on her joge she saw Matatia’s jacket popping out, and saw us and said” WHAT ARE YOU BOYS DOING HERE!
Then Miss Hills said i am as fast as a cheetah, and she made the kids run the whole playground until they were out of breath then she called the principal and told him that the kids that were SICK was at the park down the road.
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